Today’s Scribbling: Novel Rewrites

Another chapter covered in little red dotted lines, preparatory to being sliced to bits. This one I think the core conceit is good, but it’s really clumsily executed. Even the good dialogue is bad. We can rebuild it. We have the technology.

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