Some nice villainous ranting today. I’ll probably have to break it up in post, but it got a lot of plot out of my head and down onto the page. Next, some action, then some introspection.

Wee bit more action, and a bit of a cliffhanger – which I know how to resolve, for once. Next chapter should hopefully wrap up Chicago and let me get back to Vegas.

More actiony action. Tomorrow more action and a mildly cliched denoument. I’ll fix it in post.

I really need to get better at writing action scenes. I need to get better at thinking of dynamic action stuff, I guess. Maybe I need to start playing that game where everywhere you go you imagine a fight scene there.

Second short chapter on the run. I blame actioning.

Return of a character, who has turned into a face for the Faceless. Also lies. Lots of lies. Next up, death.

Chapter of talking done! Tomorrow starts two chapters of action! The plot demands it!

Another chapter of sitting around talking commences!

Big dramatic poorly written rescue. Needs to be rewritten at some point. Still, superpowered fight, so that’s cool.

Heroes in peril. Half glimpsed memories. And a need to escape. This chapter is definitely shaping up to be a good one.